Chapter 6: Roads Less Travelled
Laaaate, this comic went right to the midnight mark, made it just in time though! Add info later, after sleep. 😀
Retro-Dragon Presents- Flycoren: Kausim
A Fantasy Online Graphic Novel
Laaaate, this comic went right to the midnight mark, made it just in time though! Add info later, after sleep. 😀
Am I the only one who is just slightly wanting to redraw that arm/hand in panel 3? It just looks somewhat…backwards…or off. Idk. It just seems like the forearm is too big and the wrist is too small. I’m not trying to be a critic or anything, I don’t recall a time I really have ever criticized any of your art, but this is just bugging me! Bah! I wish my hands would let me use a pencil again -_-
I think you’re focusing too much on the arm and it’s suppose to be a exaggerated perspective. But what do I know, I’m more enthralled with the backgrounds, like HOLY Crap!
Yeah, it’s meant to be foreshortened- so it’s more over his chest than by his side. Sorry if it doesn’t look like that. Not perfect you know~
Glad you like the background Kion 😛 I had fun doing them this week.
It was just one of those things that just seemed a little off and kinda bugged me. Like, if it was me I would have drawn it a little diff, if you know what I mean? I used to be an awesome artist, but then there was the great battle of Carpal Tunnel and Arthritis. I lost both the battle and the war sadly.